I'll wait till the intervening chapters are done to send packets to the betas, so they read it as the final product will stand.
Kim Paffenroth's Page on his zombie-related fiction and non-fiction
UPDATE: Ah - the pimp! Maybe my favorite male sinner after the Epicurean! And I know the simoniac and soothsayer are coming up!!
UPDATE: OMG! I have one of the characters speak a line from King Lear! That's pretty slick, sneaking it in there like that!
UPDATE: Ah - the mass crucifixion! Nothing quite says "Welcome to Hell!" so clearly, does it? And oh my stars and garters - the Bushisms I put in the mouth of the lead executioner! Crackin' me up all over!
FINAL UPDATE: And thus, we beheld the stars! And awww - it's a nice ending. Sniffly and nice.
Again, my apologies for its tardiness, but I know you all are going to say "Wow!" when you read it.